Comments for Hill's Write Stuff

Comment on Oh Frabjous Day! 9/10A and 9/11B by Signy

Signy — Mon, 14 Sep 2009 11:24:19 +0000

What is questotation marks? Question + Quotation marks = GENIUS

Comment on Oh Frabjous Day! 9/10A and 9/11B by Signy

Signy — Mon, 14 Sep 2009 11:21:10 +0000

OH FRABJOUS DAY! CALLOOH! CALLAY! ~Signy

Comment on A mish-mosh kind of day 9/3A and 9/4B by Kelsey S.

Kelsey S. — Tue, 08 Sep 2009 00:57:33 +0000

I walk down a new street,
There are no holes.
Just a smooth road ahead.

Comment on Narrative Standard 8/28A and 8/31B by Carter

Carter — Mon, 07 Sep 2009 14:21:35 +0000

I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
I look into it.
It looks more dangerous and harder to get out of than the others.
I’m glad I learned.

Comment on Narrative Standard 8/28A and 8/31B by Carter

Carter — Mon, 07 Sep 2009 14:19:20 +0000

I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole in the side walk.
I build a bridge.

Comment on Narrative Standard 8/28A and 8/31B by Carter

Carter — Mon, 07 Sep 2009 14:18:03 +0000

I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
I hear a man calling from inside it.
It isn’t his fault.
I help him out.

Comment on Narrative Standard 8/28A and 8/31B by Rochelle

Rochelle — Sun, 06 Sep 2009 15:34:10 +0000

I walk down the same street
The hole is still there
So i have heard.

Comment on A mish-mosh kind of day 9/3A and 9/4B by Savannah Headley

Savannah Headley — Fri, 04 Sep 2009 02:40:58 +0000

Chapter 5: I walk down a different street, one free of holes.
By Savannah Headley

Comment on Narrative Standard 8/28A and 8/31B by Veronica K

Veronica K — Fri, 04 Sep 2009 01:59:21 +0000

I walk down the same street.
There is a deep hole in the sidewalk.
I peer into it and begin to fill it in.
I turn down a new street.

Comment on Narrative Standard 8/28A and 8/31B by Pierre

Pierre — Thu, 03 Sep 2009 22:43:48 +0000

There is no street
Highway 1327 replaced it
Now only my memories fall in the hole